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good afternoon...
would you please help me to correct my essay and give revision if I have any mistakes?
here is my esay:
PROFILES OF A GOOD TEACHER
Today’s child will be a man of tomorrow. It means that teacher has an important role in students’ life. Teacher must be a symbol of a kindness and love to prepare the students to become valuable assets for the country. Tragically, nowadays’ news show us maltreatment to students by teachers. It causes refusal of students’ to go to school. And soon, education in our country will become worst. So, how to solve this problem? The answer is by being a good teacher who is loved by students. To be a good teacher, one must have background knowledge, ability of managing class and teachable heart.
First, a good teacher must have background knowledge. He must have a good knowledge of his subjects, must be well prepared and interested in it and at the same time open-minded for other topics. Those things will make the students able to get the knowledge easily. Then, teacher must know well about the methods and techniques of teaching and always think to improve it. He also has to know well about psychology of children because teacher is not only teaching but also understanding the students’ psyche.
Second, a good teacher must have ability of managing class. He has classroom rules and procedures to obey by students, not to make the class’ atmosphere stiffly, but to make it pleasant. Then, he disciplines himself before anyone else. He arrives in time to start a lesson and ends it in time. He should be active and smart in classroom. He doesn’t dictate what is written on the book or the curriculum but he answers the needs of pupils and not only the needs of chosen program. He shows the whole wide world to the students.
Having a teachable heart is the third point that teacher has to. A good teacher is using his heart in teaching. He must have motherly love with the students. He should be lovely and know the children personally in order to help them with their problems. He has to be patient, understand how children act and remember how it was when he was a child. Then, teacher has to treat all pupils like his own children and answers all question even if they are really complicated. In other hand, a teacher also has to be strict, self-confident and shows authority, but at the same time he has to be the pupils’ “helper” and be like their friend who they can talk to if problems occur.
In summary, if all teachers have all above, the students will love their school and all problems that occur are easy to handle. There is a saying “Give me a fish and I eat for a day, teach me to fish and I eat for a life time”. This must be a philosophy of a good teacher. Teaching is not to give one a worthy thing but to give one a worthy way to make a simple thing.
please give me a hand...as soon as possible...thanks
with all respect,
Rianita
your essay is great. I think your teacher will be glad reading this.I find no important mistakes , so its good
Operator
tolong periksa essay saya ya...
PROFILES OF A GOOD TEACHER
Today’s child will be a man of tomorrow. It means that teacher has an important role in students’ life. Teacher must be a symbol of a kindness and love to prepare the students to become valuable assets for the country. Tragically, nowadays’ news show us maltreatment to students by teachers. It causes refusal of students’ to go to school. And soon, education in our country will become worst. So, how to solve this problem? The answer is by being a good teacher who is loved by students. To be a good teacher, one must have background knowledge, ability of managing class and teachable heart.
First, a good teacher must have background knowledge. He must have a good knowledge of his subjects, must be well prepared and interested in it and at the same time open-minded for other topics. Those things will make the students able to get the knowledge easily. Then, teacher must know well about the methods and techniques of teaching and always think to improve it. He also has to know well about psychology of children because teacher is not only teaching but also understanding the students’ psyche.
Second, a good teacher must have ability of managing class. He has classroom rules and procedures to obey by students, not to make the class’ atmosphere stiffly, but to make it pleasant. Then, he disciplines himself before anyone else. He arrives in time to start a lesson and ends it in time. He should be active and smart in classroom. He doesn’t dictate what is written on the book or the curriculum but he answers the needs of pupils and not only the needs of chosen program. He shows the whole wide world to the students.
Having a teachable heart is the third point that teacher has to. A good teacher is using his heart in teaching. He must have motherly love with the students. He should be lovely and know the children personally in order to help them with their problems. He has to be patient, understand how children act and remember how it was when he was a child. Then, teacher has to treat all pupils like his own children and answers all question even if they are really complicated. In other hand, a teacher also has to be strict, self-confident and shows authority, but at the same time he has to be the pupils’ “helper” and be like their friend who they can talk to if problems occur.
In summary, if all teachers have all above, the students will love their school and all problems that occur are easy to handle. There is a saying “Give me a fish and I eat for a day, teach me to fish and I eat for a life time”. This must be a philosophy of a good teacher. Teaching is not to give one a worthy thing but to give one a worthy way to make a simple thing.
saya kesulitan buat cari jawaban di forum ini,jadi bisa tidak tanggapan yang Bpk/Ibu berikan atas pertanyaan saya ini dikirim ke e-mailsaya di
rachelalottacute@yahoo.com
saya tunggu ya...
terima kasih
with all respect,
rianita
sudah dijawab
Operator
tolong periksa essay saya ya...
PROFILES OF A GOOD TEACHER
Today’s child will be a man of tomorrow. It means that teacher has an important role in students’ life. Teacher must be a symbol of a kindness and love to prepare the students to become valuable assets for the country. Tragically, nowadays’ news show us maltreatment to students by teachers. It causes refusal of students’ to go to school. And soon, education in our country will become worst. So, how to solve this problem? The answer is by being a good teacher who is loved by students. To be a good teacher, one must have background knowledge, ability of managing class and teachable heart.
First, a good teacher must have background knowledge. He must have a good knowledge of his subjects, must be well prepared and interested in it and at the same time open-minded for other topics. Those things will make the students able to get the knowledge easily. Then, teacher must know well about the methods and techniques of teaching and always think to improve it. He also has to know well about psychology of children because teacher is not only teaching but also understanding the students’ psyche.
Second, a good teacher must have ability of managing class. He has classroom rules and procedures to obey by students, not to make the class’ atmosphere stiffly, but to make it pleasant. Then, he disciplines himself before anyone else. He arrives in time to start a lesson and ends it in time. He should be active and smart in classroom. He doesn’t dictate what is written on the book or the curriculum but he answers the needs of pupils and not only the needs of chosen program. He shows the whole wide world to the students.
Having a teachable heart is the third point that teacher has to. A good teacher is using his heart in teaching. He must have motherly love with the students. He should be lovely and know the children personally in order to help them with their problems. He has to be patient, understand how children act and remember how it was when he was a child. Then, teacher has to treat all pupils like his own children and answers all question even if they are really complicated. In other hand, a teacher also has to be strict, self-confident and shows authority, but at the same time he has to be the pupils’ “helper” and be like their friend who they can talk to if problems occur.
In summary, if all teachers have all above, the students will love their school and all problems that occur are easy to handle. There is a saying “Give me a fish and I eat for a day, teach me to fish and I eat for a life time”. This must be a philosophy of a good teacher. Teaching is not to give one a worthy thing but to give one a worthy way to make a simple thing.
saya kesulitan buat cari jawaban di forum ini,jadi bisa tidak tanggapan yang Bpk/Ibu berikan atas pertanyaan saya ini dikirim ke e-mailsaya di
rachelalottacute@yahoo.com
saya tunggu ya...
terima kasih
with all respect,
rianita
dah di jawab
Operator
tolong dong kasih tau contoh teks anouncement?
Contoh teks pengumuman di stasiun kerete api.
Attention, please.
The departure of Argo Dwipangga train from Solo to Jakarta will be delayed for an hour due to a small technical problem. We are sorry for the inconveniences. Thank you.
Contoh teks pengumuman di sekolah
For all the class chairmen
We will have a meeting on Sunday at 10.00 am-12.00 am in Class 8A. We’d like to discuss our plan about Class Meeting next week. Please, come on time.
Chairman of OSIS
Aditya
Tolong kasih contoh text hortatory exposition buat pidato, durasinya minimal 4menit. Please! Tinggal 3hari lagi nih. Smga kbaikan anda dblz Allah Swt. Tolong yaw, scpat2ny
Operator
Ass....Saya minta tolong buatin contoh pembukaan dalam debat bahasa Inggris ya...Makasi banyak..........
Contoh pembukaan debat jika Motion nya:
This house believes that the Japanese government should introduce a comprehensive system of national referendum.
I’m Dody as the first speaker of the affirmatiive team totally agrees on that idea as we know that under the status quo, Japanese people cannot directly participate in policy-making process. Even when they want to say "no" to a policy, there is no system to express their objections. In order to solve this problem and realize true democracy, we support the resolution that the Japanese government should introduce a comprehensive system of national referendum, to be exemplified in the following plan.......
Note: Intinya, yang harus dilakukan pertama kali oleh first speaker dalam tim Affirmative adalah mendefinisikan motion (menyatakan persetujuan terhadap motion) dan juga menyampaikan konsep yang akan disampaikan oleh tim Affirmatif guna mendukung argumen tersebut.
Ass....Saya minta tolong buatin contoh pembukaan dalam debat bahasa Inggris ya...Makasi banyak..........
Contoh pembukaan debat jika Motion nya:
This house believes that the Japanese government should introduce a comprehensive system of national referendum.
I’m Dody as the first speaker of the affirmatiive team totally agrees on that idea as we know that under the status quo, Japanese people cannot directly participate in policy-making process. Even when they want to say "no" to a policy, there is no system to express their objections. In order to solve this problem and realize true democracy, we support the resolution that the Japanese government should introduce a comprehensive system of national referendum, to be exemplified in the following plan.......
Note: Intinya, yang harus dilakukan pertama kali oleh first speaker dalam tim Affirmative adalah mendefinisikan motion (menyatakan persetujuan terhadap motion) dan juga menyampaikan konsep yang akan disampaikan oleh tim Affirmatif guna mendukung argumen tersebut.
Ass....Saya minta tolong buatin contoh pembukaan dalam debat bahasa Inggris ya...Makasi banyak..........
Contoh pembukaan debat jika Motion nya:
This house believes that the Japanese government should introduce a comprehensive system of national referendum.
I’m Dody as the first speaker of the affirmatiive team totally agrees on that idea as we know that under the status quo, Japanese people cannot directly participate in policy-making process. Even when they want to say "no" to a policy, there is no system to express their objections. In order to solve this problem and realize true democracy, we support the resolution that the Japanese government should introduce a comprehensive system of national referendum, to be exemplified in the following plan.......
Note: Intinya, yang harus dilakukan pertama kali oleh first speaker dalam tim Affirmative adalah mendefinisikan motion (menyatakan persetujuan terhadap motion) dan juga menyampaikan konsep yang akan disampaikan oleh tim Affirmatif guna mendukung argumen tersebut.
Ass....Saya minta tolong buatin contoh pembukaan dalam debat bahasa Inggris ya...Makasi banyak..........
Contoh pembukaan debat jika Motion nya:
This house believes that the Japanese government should introduce a comprehensive system of national referendum.
I’m Dody as the first speaker of the affirmatiive team totally agrees on that idea as we know that under the status quo, Japanese people cannot directly participate in policy-making process. Even when they want to say "no" to a policy, there is no system to express their objections. In order to solve this problem and realize true democracy, we support the resolution that the Japanese government should introduce a comprehensive system of national referendum, to be exemplified in the following plan.......
Note: Intinya, yang harus dilakukan pertama kali oleh first speaker dalam tim Affirmative adalah mendefinisikan motion (menyatakan persetujuan terhadap motion) dan juga menyampaikan konsep yang akan disampaikan oleh tim Affirmatif guna mendukung argumen tersebut.
sir,,,help me to make pidato with english,
law bisa secepatnya ya,,,
This is just the example of speech, please create one for by yourself!
Good morning Ladies and Gentlemen. Dear brothers and sisters.
Thank you for the chance given to me. I am very honoured to stand here to deliver my speech. First of all, I’d like to introduce my self, my name is Vina , I’m 17 years old.
Before I start my speech, let me say my great gratitude to God who has blessed us with good health and happiness so we can gather here. And for my parents, my teachers, and my friends, thanks a lot for standing by me. You make my life flawless!
Well, in this very nice occasion, I‘d like to talk about “ What can I do for my school?”
Let me begin with a simple question from me. Do you want to listen to me???
I don’t think so, since you’ve been getting bored here, listening to many speeches.
Anyway, I will start with the another way. Now I want to ask you.
Everyone in this school. Have you ever got punishment? I’m sure most of you have. When you got punishment, of course you didn’t like it, did you? You’re annoyed and got angry, I guessed. Then you might say, “Oh, dear! I hate this school”. Or may be you would sing, just like “Cause you had a bad day, you're taking one down”.
However, that was just a little thing that will not erase your memory. Come on,
close your eyes, hear my voice and just get flashback. Did you remember the first
time you arrived here, in this school? Did you remember your every single thing that make you happy in this school? When you laughed together with your friends, when you felt something funny and you couldn’t stop smiling, you’re so happy. Then you got a good mark said “Horray!”
Did you remember when you were down and you cried because of puppy love? Because of your family and other troubles? Your friends accompanied you, entertained you, calmed you down, and even your teachers listened to your sharing. Now open your eyes and reliaze how could you get this precious moment? Where could it happen? Definately, it’s from our lovely high school. As we grow up, everything can
be chanced, our hair, our voice, and our life. But the memory will not be faded from my mind. It’s there and will always be there. We will memorize many things that make us laugh and cry when we were high school students.
Now one thing, suddenly cross in my mind. What can I do for my school?
I have an experience that inspire me to do a little thing for my school. A few days ago, this school held a program, everyone must clean up the classes and decorated it. My friends worked hard , slept late at night, and bought some ribbons for decoration in order to win the competititon. But when I walked around to see the other classes, I felt so sad seeing many students did nothing for their classes. I think by participating in this competition, we can show our contribution for our beloved school. Why didn’t they give the best?
That’s the point.
According to my oppinion, a little thing that we can give to our school will be a good contribution if we do the best in every program which is held by the school. Not only at this event but also in daily life school. So everyone will create comfortable atmosphere for they themselves. They can have the teaching learning process well. Maybe at the moment my friend and I just can decorate our own class. But
who knows later, may be 10 years later we can be successful people then we can renovate this lovely school. Make this school a great high school.
I think that's all that I can say about my idea. Thank you for your fully attention and see you next time.
